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I decided I would try a story this time.  (Feedback is much appreciated)

This is a story about one of my earliest, and most intense tickle experiences.


I joined boy scouts when I was fairly young.  I was in my early tweens if I remember correctly.  At the time I was a bit standoffish,  and I wasn't the most social person for sure.  People often mistakened my shyness for unfriendly or snobbish behavior, which led to a few incidents like this.

I only hung with two close friends that I already knew in the troop, Jeff, and Sam.  They had both been in the troop for a year before me, and I was the newbie this year.  Apparently, others in my troop decided that my standoffishness wouldn't fly here.

So one weekend, 30 or so of us went away on a cabin camping trip for 3 days.  As the weekend wore on I started to get the feeling that other troop members were trying to find some way to make me open up.  They were looking for some way to bring the new guy into the troop dynamic.

Today we were playing a game of football, out in a field behind our cabin.  

I can't remember exactly why, but I caught a pass, and got into a wrestling match with one other kid for the ball.  We were rolling around in a tug of war, back and forth.  He wasn't giving up, and neither was I.  

All of sudden I hear my friend Jeff  (who happened to be on the opposite team) screaming TickleHim!  TIckle HIM!  He's TIcklish!!!  

*That Traitor!*  Is all I remember thinking before I burst into hysterical giggles.

The kid  was kneeling over me, poking and prying and wiggling his fingers into every little space he could! I squirmed under him futile, trying to defend myself.  I was trying to cover up my torso in a hurry, but there was to much area to cover.  Somehow the kid slipped right past  my arms, hitting my tickle spots and  pushing on them like buttons.  My ribs, sides and tummy were getting it bad, and this kid was making it look easy.

"Give it Up!  Give up the ball kid!  Coochie CoooChie Cooouuh!"  He taunted me, and made goofy faces that made me laugh even harder.  

I was stuck on my back, like a turtle on it's shell.  I knew I was in trouble, so I surrendered.  I coughed up the ball, throwing it to the side, but it was to late.  The tickling didn't stop, the kid was fixated on exploiting my weakness.

I was to far gone, laughing helplessly. I rolled over on my stomach squealing crazily, and trying to press my arms to my sides.  I tried to  crawl away, but the kid was sitting on my butt with all his weight on me.  I kicked my legs, banging my feet against the ground behind me, but I couldn't move anywhere. I was turning to jello.  Not one of the other boys lifted a finger to help me, they just watched as this kid tickled me into utter hysterics.

The next thing I know, he was unbuttoning my uniform shirt, trying to get to my bare skin.  Just then I was saved!

Through my teary squinted eyes, I could just barely see one of our leaders standing in the doorway, calling us all inside.

Saved by a stroke of Luck!  The brown haired kid that was sinking his fingers into my torso stopped. He looked towards the door, and then back at me.  He had a huge devilish smirk on his face as if to say (You're lucky.)  He didn't want to stop, but knew that he had no choice at this point.

He rose up slowly, lifting his weight off of me.  He caught up to a few other boys,  snickering under his breath as they walked inside.

Later that day I was hanging out in the cabin alone, stretched across my bed, drawing.  After an hour or so, the 5 other boys that I was staying with came into our cabin.  They had just come back from some activity that I had chosen not to participate in.  Jeff climbed up on a bunk above my head, and plopped down on the bunk above me.

I never looked up from my sketch pad to see what they were doing.  

Of course, a few idol minutes for them was to many. There wasn't much to do in the cabin, so they used this time to bug me. They started asking questions about why I didn't talk more, and why I was so shy blah blah......

I grunted, trying to ignore them and focus. I continued on with what I was doing.  

Seconds later, I peaked up and noticed the same grinning face of the brown haired kid from earlier.(I found later that his name was Will.)  

He was the ring leader of this Irritate me movement.  Will began again, doing whatever he could to annoy me, and get under my skin, while the others watched.  He sat on the side of my bed, playing with my hair, and poking stuff into my ear.  Every now and then, he nudged my sides making me jump.

By now, I had enough of Will as I could take.  I turned around to yell at him, and I saw 3 others standing with him.  My eyes sprung open as they snatched me off my bed, and wrestled me down to the floor.  Two of them sat on my ankles, and the other two held my upperbody in one way or another, pinning me tight to the floor.  They all had impish grins on their faces.  There was a frosty air to the room, and I had a bad feeling about what was coming.


I struggled to loose my arms and legs, until I heard one kid say "We have to break this newbie in!"  

My weakness showed itself again, and  my terrible ticklish vulnerability showed itself.

They untucked my shirttails, and pulled my shirt over my head.  I felt fingers wiggling and squeezing me all over in the next instant.  The boy's whisked their fingers over me, brushing my ribs, my bare tummy, my sides, and my belly button.  

I burst into frantic struggled giggles instantly. 

My laughter doubled when someone found their way under my arms, It was over.  My armpits are one of my most horribly ticklish spots, and I always guard them.  I tried to hold myself, but I lost my restraint quickly, letting high pitched go of high pitched giggles and adolescent laughter.  I could hear myself, gasping and squealing girlishly.

I bucked and squirmed weakly trying to get them off, but my energy was sapped quickly.

"I bet his feet are ticklish to!!"  one yelled.

A chill always shoots up my spine, knowing my feet are next.  I watched them strip off my heavy brown hiking boots, followed by my long thick socks, and toss them away.

My soft sensitive soles were now bare, and another of my worst tickish spots was exposed.  Fingers attacked again, started to diddle over the soft sole skin. Their fingers pryed their way under my toes, and danced over my soles.  My reactions were most feral when they found my arch.

I totally lost it, laughing like a mental case.  I snorted, and squealed, and tears of laughter ran down my cheeks.  Gales of belly aching laughter seeped out out of me, with no way to stop it.  No one could save me this time, no one could even hear me.  The cabin door was closed, and none of our leaders was around.  The next cabin was to far away.  I just kept laughing and laughing.

Through my teary eyes, I could just barely see my friend Jeff on the top bunk.  He was  looking down at me, kicking his legs back and forth calmly.  I was convinced, he set me up!  More than likely, he was the mastermind of this scheme, to make me more "Comfortable" with the troop.  He didn't lift a finger to help me, and he just watched my ticklish fate unfold.  

When I began having trouble breathing, Jeff finally stepped in and said I had enough.  I was a sweating, panting, crying ticklish mess when they stopped.

They let me go, but gave me a warning.  They would tickle me from then on, anytime I seemed standoffish or uncomfortable.  

It was an extreme tickling for sure. Personally, I always thought they used these excuses to justify tickling me.  But I would be lying if I said I didn't have fun with them.
Early Tickle Experience in Boy Scouts
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gm6petsy02 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2015  Student Digital Artist
What did you use to write this?
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Chillguysketch Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2015
What do you mean?
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Honuk Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014
I like the story but only one thing... they can't remove the socks before the boots^^
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Chillguysketch Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014
Well spotted, fixed it.
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Poodles1215 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014
Loved it!! I hope you post the story of your revenge on the other kids!!!
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funtickler Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013
great story!!
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Solleticoso Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013
Wow!!

That's a cool story for sure!!

I really had fun reading at it, and I feel more of a similitude between you as a teenager and me as a teen... but I wasn't all that ticklish at the time, I usually acted as a tickler with a close friend of mine, who was very ticklish, and who used to invite me to his home, an Saturdays afternoon, to play videogames...

That's a fantastic and very sweet story! :) Thank you for posting! :)
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Chillguysketch Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013
Oh ok, cool experience you had there.  Thanks for reading, glad you liked it.
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Solleticoso Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013
Oh, it was entairly my pleasure!!

I'd like to "talk" a little with you through notes, if you'd like it too, and if you have some time, about our tickling experiences! :)
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Chillguysketch Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013
sure, feel free.
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Solleticoso Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013
ehy, take a look at your note, please! :)
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haruhost Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013
Awesome story, hope get to hear some more in the future.
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Chillguysketch Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013
Thanks, glad you enjoyed :)
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Ticklishboy30 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013
Awesome story you should post the revenge. I like your style it's fun. :)
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Chillguysketch Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013
Thanks ha.  I did get a few chances for revenge on a few of them.
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Tray25 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013
dang that's rough D : but awesome story.  well hopefully you got them back? 
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Chillguysketch Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013
lol, I got some of them, but I was a pretty frequent target.  I already liked tickling by then so it wasn't all bad.
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Tray25 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013
ah very nice then : D
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